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hometown girl. by ~jhrh:iconjhrh:



shes of the romantic side of town
and her hair is aroused in the breeze the water brings,
and her lips have this salty sea taste
that makes your mouth quiver,
and your body go numb.
her voice makes the sea gulls unfold
into the misty grey sky.
and all the fishermen sing of her as they haul up their lines
and stare at withered faces
in the ripples of the sea.

her skirt it spins in the draft
and her deep brown eyes dilate and stop the world
as the birds stop chirping
and the grass stops growing
and the sun stops shining.
the nearest she gets to boston
is the coffee shop around the corner, which she stops at
on her way to the moon for a big apple pie.
the flowers she picks are dandelions
and the flowers she recieves are pitcher plants
that she crawls into, to meet her esquire
in her polka dot shirt.

and when she cries
the oceans widen and fill to the brim,
until the liquor cures the heartache she's wearing
and dries up the tears.
but the mascara is still smudged under her lashes
and there's a white rim of salt around the jagged rocks
for the next time she has to bite her lip too hard.
©2006-2009 ~jhrh
:iconjhrh:

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a blend of pride, and madness.

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:iconpenthesileiaravyn:
Wow. Very nice.

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We're all going to hell in a Barbie Dream Car....
:iconjhop:
anyone who can feel this emotion, and describe this emotion is beautiful, because this is beautiful.
i almost knew something was about to pour out of you any second.
no matter what it was about, no matter if you wrote it 5 months ago,
you never seize to stop pouring.
:iconburton-chic:
christ, eddy. this is wonderful. it leaves me wondering: is this the same jewish girl? or am i in the wrong parking lot altogether...

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on the slow train time does not interfere
:iconemstockley:
oh god...
i wish i was that girl.
that was magnifique.

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In the dark it is easy to pretend that the truth is what it ought to be.
:iconjhrh:
and i never pour to stop seizing.. the moment that is.

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"We were somewhere around Barstow on the edge of the desert when the drugs began to take hold."
:iconjhrh:
ha, i hope you're jokin' 'bout the jewish girl right?

that was my dear anne frank, can't ya remember her?

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"We were somewhere around Barstow on the edge of the desert when the drugs began to take hold."
:iconjhrh:
:) why thank you.

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"We were somewhere around Barstow on the edge of the desert when the drugs began to take hold."
:iconburton-chic:
oh yes, old anne frank. we went to high school together i believe. she signed my yearbook with the star of david...

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on the slow train time does not interfere
:iconjhrh:
hahaha... cruel

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"We were somewhere around Barstow on the edge of the desert when the drugs began to take hold."

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